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[讲稿选登] 众秘夜思第50集 对一篇汇报材料的修改(山东端方 2014年11月11日)

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, Z3 t) a1 }+ K$ Y/ }: p# ]: Qline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">7 M) ]( O9 h+ T) @ _2 n16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:$ b. N+ B0 f, N& r! s8 P) N: j 楷体_GB2312;mso-font-kerning:0pt">地点: J# [7 P+ F+ q- M' X. mfont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;0 I4 ]+ B8 W6 h% n1 r0 o' M mso-font-kerning:0pt">老秘网“文稿修改演播室”(QQ群号:366351120; Q8 [8 {* ]- y: L% a' Xfont-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

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7 M$ Y$ ?3 m/ `& {4 [* w 12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体; ) \+ h7 h# u* Y& B$ r3 {6 ]mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方0 F0 S0 ^/ i" R 黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:$ x- t3 @; E% F7 w- r; U mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; 1 t( ^8 O7 ^5 v8 w( Y0 ?. ~mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力层次分的比较清晰,框架也没问题,基本把要说的事理顺明白。如果是报告的话确实如此。猎人,谈谈你的看法?; ~; _' {: e2 p) @& @4 X mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:, w, ^& i' @( b$ g! C9 N 0pt">

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; Q5 k+ O; @" B+ R {12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体; 7 j* z/ I4 s7 w; smso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方8 r- {% F" i& u+ ^3 m; q8 f5 ]8 v黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:8 ?( E3 Y% a/ d/ X! Q2 @mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;+ X8 H! E5 s4 R% G mso-font-kerning:0pt">除了发言的几位,那些朋友在,先冒个泡,接下来我要分析了。6 m( I+ t( B9 N# K) d仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

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1 K5 L1 ]$ _! W0 t! V$ I mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;7 J" X: S O& t9 o8 ?/ P- n mso-font-kerning:0pt">星星火* q k* W# M# _/ b3 s$ T4 x; e1 qmso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning: . g6 M# w0 e: E" B! x2 s* e% u& F/ ]0pt">:4 z6 i9 ^& U: a3 | font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;5 [1 i; z% v ]! |" l; ~! ]5 R mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">报告和汇报材料的区别主要有哪些呢?% X6 _2 t3 ~8 r7 F mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning: , D* t0 i2 O' [' d0pt">

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' P( G9 \! F3 s; ` H4 q& G line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">/ u& P2 r- V# p$ g% N 楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: & u) ?; h( ^+ Y2 r. F# b" q宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力8 I' L* _% d" S' y9 j' ?mso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning: / B8 Y$ p. ^' S' R4 L# l6 [0pt">:4 j, a3 }7 [1 W+ J8 V0 C12.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"> ** @7 r- V% Y9 P& L3 c/ V7 n1 @ p16.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family: 0 q# g% ?" A$ b6 n"Times New Roman"">单位,本系统可以省略。& H- t( i2 X4 w7 R. x' l1 hmso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312">

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" f4 L$ M# V9 h; X2 u; r6 |3 Lline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">8 Y/ ]2 @9 z$ V% f9 ^+ i. K1 r mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: ( o' q- ~: H1 O, ^2 r2 E3 ? E宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方' {) e- m# v0 x/ A9 [ 黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:) y0 I0 M8 x: k: U) z+ s" s mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">不过一般而言,带着标题,思路更清晰,尤其是现场会的时候,更容易把工作汇报清楚。4 E" x0 x3 _& m [7 y 仿宋_GB2312">

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# \; G% ^5 n9 J line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">5 _) k P5 W+ \8 Z" ~ 楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:& ?5 K. a$ W1 t0 m 宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">永远# E* @: C, k6 emso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312">:0 j/ C. I7 J) rmso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">重要的会议需要双面的。

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$ R2 k* ~( t* g8 g' C line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"># f5 Y+ L1 l" t! y2 ~+ Lmso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:' W+ e/ Y$ J7 M" k" D5 f 宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方. J* T8 |) v3 t黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:, G5 h5 R; `7 X6 {# Z9 Lmso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">首先,背景中,来我单位调研的是分管副区长,而不是海洋渔业局的领导。如果副区长听了这个汇报,开头都是不按照自己的部署和要求,直接对接到市里部门去了,会作何感想。+ z' n& [( y5 A7 C! f+ g仿宋_GB2312">

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. s" P- J# s# w+ Aline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">2 B3 z! s1 Q! c 楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: ; M% T+ G7 p; ?: X; Y宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力1 R" E# J+ b! L/ @6 X: n+ e; j( ^ d( Umso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:& [- l$ c9 c8 O* V 0pt">:3 w) o( o. `2 @' afont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">了解会议的背景,讲话者、听众,很重要。7 B' X) K4 ?4 C仿宋_GB2312">

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- a3 |' H" J. a9 x: D* A line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">; P" r, a1 }* D/ h! R' ^" Rmso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:" i0 w8 g. _/ r, `' m 宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方$ z$ H; ^" A5 w2 I: e, e! M" j黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:3 H5 ^' j0 b. ~3 ~$ y" p( |, g4 Rmso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">要说导语的内容,这里就复杂了,有依据式、陈述式、目的式,没法展开说。就这个导语而言,就是依据式开头,根据! P! w9 h: c' e l2 j' Q 仿宋_GB2312">xxx' c9 T9 T8 X/ Nfont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">部署,或者按照 l) r8 v. F! `- V ]- d- Q仿宋_GB2312">xxx, j7 ?. N3 t# R* ?0 _7 q* nfont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">要求。2 ~! t1 Z7 G# |仿宋_GB2312">

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# T! j/ z& D2 N line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">% `2 w+ k) d( _- j+ i 楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: - w' G2 ?2 \$ @2 }6 f k宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力) j" e; _. Q* _0 _- Z/ vmso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312">:$ n; M) \4 O0 P. E; Z% ]mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">这导语也没说时间,到底这项工作什么时间开展的,多长时间了,一点也没交待。$ O8 E+ M3 l. d* A 仿宋_GB2312">

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5 y6 Z8 I% C- R& L+ z6 i line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">$ X2 R6 `. {3 |; B7 g- i" t 楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:4 |6 u; s2 v0 Z$ l2 | 宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">山猫8 E) X8 T' S9 f$ F mso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:2 g* K9 Q3 L' _$ J9 Z: D 0pt">:; i" w" @$ E( ^5 tfont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">同意阿力,报告者的目的不清也是个问题吧?想汇报成绩为主,还是反应问题为主。8 i* H8 s" K% X5 K& ]: x仿宋_GB2312">

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6 B) y8 d. R/ a j5 u& w line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">( q# [* C" f7 D, d; ~mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: 4 s% J9 R* x2 i宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方( c) {, R* T7 {9 o( |( X7 w 黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:/ G; @6 s5 k! g5 e% X+ B5 q mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">对,开门见山,直接亮出意图。

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9 ^; f4 R) t) u7 b8 |! qline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">1 d# j4 Q: V0 H2 r' _ 楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:, p U. ^% i4 T1 e& K) i 宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">山猫1 `% d2 h' n L6 u* U' imso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:) D5 E" V; O. u& r7 K' x8 t2 [/ K 0pt">:0 i& c J0 N+ bfont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">我觉得既然是给副区长听,就是想多汇报成绩。) }) O4 s; Q+ v: [- Q5 W- S$ |仿宋_GB2312">

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6 }" }% j# r) z/ a$ f6 v, Bline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">; `- {; B' K4 G5 t0 Z! K mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:8 h* O" j' \+ I+ X: L; R 宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方1 F- r& A& w9 ~, S h1 x黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:3 ?1 O$ V. [8 z) f! {3 | mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">作者的目的其实是想汇报工作开展情况,5 c/ y' @$ N i6 E 仿宋_GB2312">yy8 l9 F. {7 r, }8 u" a" K t' p/ r font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">街道统筹安排,扎实推进辖区" Q n0 ~5 z8 {/ g9 S+ }仿宋_GB2312">,) G+ W f6 l7 ?/ @) E font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">海上网箱养殖清理工作。+ H7 L+ R% Q p7 {- j仿宋_GB2312">

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; c7 [3 ?7 L; O, w' oline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">2 t- w, n3 T/ ^- V! d; l% }% K楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: 5 I3 Q3 l( ~- t- B宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力; Q0 R/ E P, a mso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:, t9 b N, f. ?: E 0pt">:9 v7 b9 D, ?4 s' o; p& z" N0 B font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">扎实推进辖区0 C1 i' I& ]0 X; Z& t仿宋_GB2312">,$ Q( v( M3 [4 D3 Z7 ]font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">海上网箱养殖清理工作,多了个逗号吧。5 r1 Z* W+ J/ ~( F* F 仿宋_GB2312">

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5 A- W! B% E% u% @ line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">1 A Y/ x, Z* v6 o5 C6 Omso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">从今年5 c# M7 Z8 Z/ ~ F3 r' j: I 仿宋_GB2312">XX/ J+ B. X! D+ b' q9 ?font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">月份以来,: S& R+ W& }' }# d; ~仿宋_GB2312">yy% ]2 j9 s/ n* I$ r' [+ q3 t font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">街道认真开展海上网箱养殖清理工作。现根据会议安排,汇报有关情况如下:) j- _: y7 a6 N% Q9 p, H b+ K0 s仿宋_GB2312">

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& S j2 E8 B8 t- J# ] ?! x) f line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">2 b* w2 V, S8 K2 Z+ ?4 H1 `楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:1 } o. e' Z3 W3 p% C7 H. Q 宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力7 U" F8 t7 j6 s0 p X: w4 C mso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning: ! W5 E$ }+ i( K& Y0pt">:' k5 u' I9 E) q! v( Y/ Y hfont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">山猫这样太简单不行。( ^& c/ i g0 x* a' Z. Y- {( J$ y# V 仿宋_GB2312">

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/ ]9 I# A8 }2 P+ a" ?line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">: P& E# m9 Q" F: g# m楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: ; L' ]- F* w1 Y: z4 H( r宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力! I4 X Z4 f$ s: N5 |2 Xmso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:7 J- r/ O' h3 a9 ?* i R+ l 0pt">:. k5 ]# f( |4 ?font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">今年来,在区委区政府的领导下,我街道围绕$ B' c3 s; c3 [ 仿宋_GB2312">xx- W: Y% V; y( b4 R* g8 a' h5 Cfont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">市海洋与渔业局《胶州湾海域养殖设施清理整治实施方案》部署和要求,精心组织,统筹安排,扎实推进海上网箱养殖清理工作,目前工作取得了阶段性成效。现将有关情况汇报如下:7 e" ^4 z' n1 y, X7 v! c 仿宋_GB2312">

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% x% J5 i6 v4 f8 {3 y# @7 I line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">1 Z5 G. L' B0 n9 U% O$ \楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: % j" k% a7 c1 m宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">山猫/ w6 J) F2 W( p8 o; jmso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning: # J1 _' z4 `2 \! f2 ^0pt">:9 e8 Z7 q d8 Y) P3 Q5 Cfont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">如果口头汇报的话,精心组织,统筹安排,扎实推进此类话。! a/ m: L+ ?' j仿宋_GB2312">

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2 M3 H4 n: N) }+ Q* ?line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">7 D" h0 t% g8 z' s 楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: " E( v" T& y# N* W5 P* m0 ~宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力2 T( ]3 Y1 W: c' \& T mso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:& f& |# m. J$ P- h) ], _% C7 r1 c 0pt">:/ F: U; T" E1 \; W& ~+ K font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">区委不要,那就。! \2 U, }/ z- ~仿宋_GB2312">

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7 W2 ]2 W( a( X0 ?3 k/ u, @line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">2 n5 ^8 ?' L# L: R. m楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: & h6 O+ q3 G7 `+ V$ [4 n宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力3 _, _% y3 H/ }( Lmso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:" P0 u5 y: r/ e( c 0pt">:9 g" W" H. E6 d0 ifont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">我感觉还是要把《胶州湾海域养殖设施清理整治实施方案》点出,工作是围绕这个方案的部署和要求来开展的。9 x5 C- ` E; d1 \" i3 o$ J 仿宋_GB2312">

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" {# A4 K& i1 t% V3 N) c- g/ uline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">- h2 S# Z u q! i. O( E 楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:$ Q# c2 L2 C1 T5 S% L: ~5 n 宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力 g+ {/ ?" i( O2 V# mmso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning: 1 ~7 a! k, F6 B" f) n0pt">:* G6 i8 f' X, o& Y6 nfont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">没有这个方案的下发,也就不会开展海上参排网箱清理工作。相当于一个行动的指南。3 |( i6 U$ ^ X/ |- _" e仿宋_GB2312">

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$ d: |/ i. Y3 ?* m7 @+ M- [ line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">& {! L/ |. A5 L1 W2 r 楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: s0 P$ P0 c! S7 P9 J宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">山猫& v$ K& y2 R/ P mso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:2 R' b, J% |" d5 z; l3 V, U 0pt">:) F# t6 |; `8 j4 ~: B9 C0 {( Q3 i font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">我觉得,工作报告可以八股一些,毕竟有时候适当八股才有点气势,但口头汇报正如端方所言,应该短平快& V3 x' x5 @5 a/ I1 J 仿宋_GB2312">

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: t1 z( h/ c2 @) ]$ [ line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">9 d8 v% Q, `4 e; [- O6 Omso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:1 C% I3 W: U4 Y" M! o 宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方3 m' _3 L. j0 c* u' x j' H4 _黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">: 9 ^. t: a2 f/ e3 i$ x4 J8 [& S mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">有啊,这个必须有。阿力,有一点涉及到背景的,那就是,《胶州湾海域养殖设施清理整治实施方案》是市海洋渔业局提出的,但是作为街道,开展工作是根据区海洋渔业局方案来的。5 J6 J) N% A, E3 H& V7 |, Q% G仿宋_GB2312">

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/ t) V/ t* G' m* ?0 p6 yline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"># A* r7 p( M6 kmso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: ; L4 @7 g6 Z, [- g! E# c. _宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方/ Q9 T; A( D' Y& g2 m黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:9 _& ]9 N. X0 T8 X2 \/ s mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">根据区政府及市、区相关部门工作要求,) T3 H3 M; j5 C6 @仿宋_GB2312">xx: n1 |9 q& H3 D% efont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">街道统筹安排,扎实推进辖区海上网箱养殖清理工作,取得了初步成效。现将有关情况汇报如下。这是我改的。+ V& C" X4 I: U仿宋_GB2312">

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; P8 O0 N7 b3 K* \! r9 L7 E" g ?* ]' i line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">8 J* }( ?5 q# ~3 p2 k8 Omso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:+ g& F f* f0 ?% O 宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方& e" u0 D$ C( b' n6 x7 v/ ^6 V 黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">: ! N/ t: m0 Y) g6 E B3 R/ ]5 i- v$ A6 o) j- Y. g7 K: f% i 仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">分管肯定是主抓这项工作的。第一句,突出区政府,主要就是对照副区长来的,其他的单位都有参加,但都不是主要与会领导,作了模糊处理。% h; e% f+ ^7 r2 o5 a! g' w 仿宋_GB2312">

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0 f" n3 F0 f! R9 Z$ ^1 X5 o% fline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">6 v4 K2 d" w+ }9 _1 C, p# n楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: 6 V, ~& d+ o3 f宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力3 G4 Q, c/ c1 E1 \0 Omso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning: ; U/ c- G# a- Y& g& k1 e0pt">:# |: m6 R/ b1 V" T8 z1 Q4 |font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">领导有的不是很了解,只知大概情况。! w. d& [, q" k+ K 仿宋_GB2312">

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0 r& g+ }0 w2 O$ `, U: iline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">8 f4 l2 @6 Y6 d. a" Omso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: ( ~5 q3 P8 w N宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方5 N1 c$ R) L2 ^! I% K9 R O& l+ L黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:0 [7 C4 l7 H* [6 P) V2 I7 _mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">第二个信息点就是统筹推进整治工作,取得初步成效。阿力讲的不错,想复杂了,就是一个简单的现场会,把工作进展情况汇报清楚即可。( f+ k- G0 B+ ^* ]. R/ U仿宋_GB2312">

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3 Z; W& [( x5 j9 V, _5 G, v0 Fline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">6 R& i( [- r9 Y1 [ e mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: & i! ]+ y& f% s2 B: E3 }宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方4 L, }1 g5 G1 f4 g& S/ Y7 O 黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">: e V3 W8 g7 M5 H+ ~mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">不是,就是没说清楚,写作者缺少基本情况的意识,只是在凭着感觉写。6 c8 G; J# W8 w ~& D! Q* G仿宋_GB2312">

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" H5 j c1 `6 y/ Q. Y( p& g% U line-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">/ `1 j& K/ H" u# t楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: 8 ?& P' Y& O7 I L2 w, Z宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力2 D' [, G6 ~3 K* ^ mso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:* W+ _% O. a, t5 e' u% v 0pt">:0 r, l& C$ s) } 12.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312">yy B5 s1 h: m$ ~. ^' s+ p: [1 @( G/ E mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">街道共有海上网箱海参养殖户. M0 H* o# ]5 g) e' B2 W 仿宋_GB2312">27$ s: N" [" d1 G6 o font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">户,大小网箱& G$ G4 n* e: ^仿宋_GB2312">25919+ W1 k6 c8 A4 ?) \3 @4 H0 t4 Ufont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">个。( L* i8 x$ \4 z3 E 仿宋_GB2312">27+ ]) [0 j7 r+ Q2 O, D' m6 `font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">户是不是合法?" q8 V2 R" z. p9 U7 [, a 仿宋_GB2312">

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# d5 P J+ w# s. _8 Qline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">9 m% ~; [$ t6 K/ b' imso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">如该公司逾期不签订协议,建议根据《胶州湾海域养殖设施清理整治实施方案》要求予以拆除。好象又不是合法养殖户。* Z$ E, h" t: p6 U9 F仿宋_GB2312">

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7 J- Y# }+ e& f) L; Hline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">+ k" P2 M) B0 R9 _8 Mmso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;font-family:黑体;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:: _5 `2 ^7 z" q7 J0 Q 宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方. R7 [0 ?; ?3 u- e" \. F# x5 t黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:0 `( G) @0 @+ v0 e: i mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">一开始我对这块也是不熟悉,后来读了两遍才算理顺清晰,没有合不合法的因素,现在只谈基本情况:5 [! A9 h: P) c* r7 S 仿宋_GB2312">

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% m. a$ }" ]- T0 e6 K% Tline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">yy6 T9 r2 P% t0 F" U M w# h mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">街道共有海上网箱海参养殖户27 q" W, `9 J: y1 l! I1 | mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">户,大小网箱25919! t5 A+ z" Z, n( ]. |& p W mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">个。在工作前期,yy& t0 G! S/ U3 }% `- A" u5 J' f& m mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">街道组织召开专题会议,研究部署了具体清理方案,并告知清理网箱养殖的目的、奖励的政策等,下达清理通知书,如在规定时间内清理的可得到相关奖励。大部分养殖业户愿意主动接受并配合网箱拆除工作,但是也有一部分养殖户在得知情况后,思想波动比较大,有较大的抵触情绪。为了消除群众顾虑,街道安排经验丰富和业务熟练的工作人员分组进行了海上网箱摸底和宣传动员,多次一家一户的解释政策,帮助养殖户想办法做好善后工作,及时对辖区内海上网箱及养殖设施进行清点、登记,并留存影像资料。清点过程中,由现场清点人员及网箱业主共同签字确认,并对统计情况进行张贴公示,落实好奖励资金的发放,确保群众利益不受损失。+ Y: W/ O( p' L! O1 R仿宋_GB2312">

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u5 E0 z" Q, T+ i/ |6 Yline-height:26.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">0 X" t3 z( F: g! F4 G: d 楷体_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: : c. w; s* a1 b! t. l" i, a6 v) ?宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">阿力; x, t: A. h1 q; H8 Z mso-fareast-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:( W2 C0 _$ `. a 0pt">:$ R. L2 J* ~% Z1 G% x* U" Z, v font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">基本情况:4 f2 Q+ M+ V8 z0 C9 J仿宋_GB2312">yy q, [3 L) F& N7 {- P! ]font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">街道共有海上网箱海参养殖户) k, Z! [/ U0 C2 V2 A$ b9 w仿宋_GB2312">279 E& \; |4 C& ~( O$ ^4 e5 c font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">户,大小网箱9 ]# S H8 U, {! o* v6 Q( L- U* n仿宋_GB2312">259191 H/ U& g4 v# i9 ] font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman"">个。大部分养殖业户愿意主动接受并配合网箱拆除工作,但是也有一部分养殖户在得知情况后,思想波动比较大,有较大的抵触情绪。2 y4 ]0 U7 c8 M) K8 A 仿宋_GB2312">

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beijiguang 发表于 2014-11-16 21:30:34 | 显示全部楼层
 
公文写作百法例讲
内容很实在的讨论,很有针对性。
 
网事如梦 发表于 2014-11-24 13:36:49 | 显示全部楼层
 
老秘网虚拟稿费
通过讨论学习,感觉很有教育意义,很有针对性。
 
xiejishen 发表于 2014-11-24 15:58:56 | 显示全部楼层
 
专业写文章
汇报材料是经常用到的,必须好好看看
 
夜莺 发表于 2014-11-28 15:41:26 | 显示全部楼层
 
用心谋事、用心做事、用心成事,努力成为本职工作的行家里手。
 
沙漠孤驼 发表于 2014-12-4 21:20:45 | 显示全部楼层
 
从导语修改看来,每句话都要有很强的针对性。
 
孝南秘书 发表于 2014-12-6 10:48:52 | 显示全部楼层
 
基本情况:yy街道共有海上网箱海参养殖户27户,大小网箱25919个。大部分养殖业户愿意主动接受并配合网箱拆除工作
 
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好好学学汇报与报告的区别,一定会有进步!0 ?1 U/ ~8 C% v* N- x+ C7 q2 v
 
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说得真好,赞同。学而不思则罔!!!
 
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